Thursday, October 27, 2005

10 seconds of pain

She asked what’s wrong.
“Nothing,” he stared at the wall.
“You sure?” she didn’t seem concerned.
“Yeah,” he lied.
“I love you,” she lied.
“I love you too.”

4 comments:

Oliviah said...

This one struck me more than all of your other ones put together. How powerful in its brevity.

Day Dreamer said...

Thank you. Sometimes less is more.

Wegrit said...

So much can be said in so few words.

Penguinaut said...

i know exactly what you mean